Old shames

One advice given writers is to try and get their manuscript as clean as they can before passing it to someone else. A little care and self editing goes a long way to make a favorable first impression.

Another advice given writers is to not try and mix the "editor" and "creator" inside them. Completely different modes of thought, and they don't work together well if used all at once. So when you write, just write, they say. Then, take a break- sometimes even months long- and return with fresh eyes and in editor mode.

There's certainly something to be said about returning to something with fresh eyes. Returning to this blog, reading some of the previous posts, makes me do a facepalm. I committed at least one major howler in that post about the Mind over Money review which I've now marked. Not deleted- it deserves to stay there forever burned in internet memory. Gaaah. What a brainfart.

And anyway, some of these posts are horribly long. Embarrassingly wordy, and that needs to change. Starting now.

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